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Forum "Korrekturlesen" - write eight or ten sentences

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write eight or ten sentences: Frage (beantwortet)

Status:	(Frage) beantwortet
Datum:	13:54 Fr 30.09.2005
Autor:	suzan

Hallöchen milky-way find ich klasse das du mir hilfst :-)

danke..

also...

Please write down what you have been doing this week. Please write about eight or ten sentences.

This week I have been goinig to the sunstudio and my face was red.

Than I have been going shopping with my boyfriend and my daughter.

We have been bought clouthers for my daughter.

Yesterday I have been going outside with my daughter and we have been playing.

Than I have been making my school at home.

And I have been making my fingernails.

I have been cleaning my bathroom, my kitchen, my bedroom, my livingroom and my doughters room.

I have been watching Tv.

And I have been going to my mother.

ist das so richtig??
LG
SUzan

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write eight or ten sentences: Antwort

Status:	(Antwort) fertig
Datum:	13:59 Fr 30.09.2005
Autor:	milky-way

> Hallöchen milky-way find ich klasse das du mir hilfst :-)

> danke..

bitte, bitte, gern geschehen ;-)

> also...
>
> Please write down what you have been doing this week.
> Please write about eight or ten sentences.
>
> This week I have been goinig to the sunstudio and my face
> was red.

... and my face got red (...wurde rot, statt ist rot)
> Than I have been going shopping with my boyfriend and my
> daughter.

Than I have been shopping with my boyfriend and my daughter.
> We have been bought clouthers for my daughter.

We bought clothes for my daughter.
> Yesterday I have been going outside with my daughter and we
> have been playing.

Yesterday, I went outside and played with my daughter.
> Than I have been making my school at home.

Than I have been making homeworks at home.
> And I have been making my fingernails.
>  oder: and I made my fingernails.
> I have been cleaning my bathroom, my kitchen, my bedroom,
> my livingroom and my doughters room.

I cleaned my bathroom, my kitchen, ....
> I have been watching Tv.
>
> And I have been going to my mother.

I went to my mother, oder besser: I went to visit my mother.
>
> ist das so richtig??
>  LG
>  SUzan