Tagebucheintrag < Korrekturlesen < Englisch < Sprachen < Vorhilfe
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| Aufgabe | Dear diary,
As I came in in my new classroom I wondered that everyone looked so strange at me. May Im not the prettiest boy in the world but the way they looked at me was so strange. They called me stiff because I walk so slow and carefully said a girl. But it doesnt matter .It was so funny as they sang like in a chorus of Stiff! Stiff! Stiff!. And then someone had a great idea I have fleas if they touch me they have fleas ,too. They named this game No returns it was one of the most popularly game of the school. All you had to do was get someone - throw them against me and shout, No returns. Then you couldnt be got and that person had to grab someone else and throw them against me and so on.
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Hallo,
wir müssen aus einem Text im Schulbuch, einen Tagebucheintrag formulieren.
Es wäre sehr nett, wenn den Text jemand Korrekturlesen könnte.
Vielen Dank im Voraus.
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(Antwort) fertig  | | Datum: | 18:34 Mi 19.11.2008 | | Autor: | davr |
hallo,
dein Text ist soweit gut gelungen, nur ein paar Sachen würde ich ändern:
As I came -> When I came
but the way they looked at me was so strange -> [..] was very strange
said a girl -> a girl said !
had to do was get someone -> catch someone
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