Kurze Korrektur (140 Wörter) < Übersetzung < Englisch < Sprachen < Vorhilfe
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(Frage) beantwortet  | | Datum: | 13:01 So 02.08.2009 | | Autor: | Ph0eNiX |
Hallo zusammen!
Habe hier einen kurzen text, wäre sehr froh,wenn dieser jemand kurz korrigieren könnte:
By the time George finished university in 1990, he was an average guy who lived with his parents, went to school by bicycle and had no girlfriend. In the year 1986 his live changed. He passed all the necessary exams to get authorized to study at the University of Vancouver. He was really proud of himself but also a little bit scared because he lived 500 kilometres away from Vancouver and he knew that he had to leave his family and rent an apartment next to the university. As he began studying at the University it was a completely new life. No parents who give orders, no rules at home but there were also new responsibilities he had to deal with. His live got better; he bought a car, met a lot of new people, got a girlfriend and finally graduated in 1990.
Viele Dank!
cu Ph0eNiX
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(Antwort) fertig  | | Datum: | 13:07 So 02.08.2009 | | Autor: | Infinit |
Halo Ph0eNiX,
der Text ist soweit verständlich. Zwie Anmerkungen habe ich jedoch:
1) "began studying" ist etwas ungewöhnlich. "started his studies" wäre da wohl besser.
2) Das leben schreibt man mit einem "f", also life und nicht live.
Viele Grüße,
Infinit
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(Mitteilung) Reaktion unnötig  | | Datum: | 13:23 So 02.08.2009 | | Autor: | Ph0eNiX |
Hallo Infinit
Vielen Dank für deine zwei Korrekturen. Das "began studying" wohl nicht ganz stimmt dachte ich mir :)
Gruss Ph0eNiX
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