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(Frage) überfällig  | | Datum: | 09:25 Mi 29.04.2009 | | Autor: | Dinker |
The modern technology like computer allows people to think they are communicating and sharing their feelings without really getting involved with others personally. Many people spend more time talking over computer lines than talking with real people face-to-face.
Some people consider it as waste of time to conduct a profound conversation. Or they are stressed at work, that hey havent any time for conversation.
Several themes in Fahrenheit 451 involve individual freedom. Therefore I would like to make a link with (wiht oder to oder andere Präposition) today.
The open scene serves (?) the reader the elements of the society for example how they live, how relationships operate (?) and what they like.
Thank's a lot
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(Mitteilung) Reaktion unnötig  | | Datum: | 11:50 Mi 29.04.2009 | | Autor: | Frasier |
Nur Vorschläge:
> The modern technology like computers allow people to think
> they are communicating and sharing their feelings without
> really getting involved with others personally. Many people
> spend more time talking over computer lines than talking
> with real people face-to-face.
> Some people consider it as waste of time to conduct a
> profound conversation. Or they are stressed at work, that
> hey havent any time for conversation.
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> Several themes in Fahrenheit 451 involve individual
> freedom. Therefore I would like to make a link to today.
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> The open scene serves (?) the reader the elements of the
> society for example how they live, how relationships
> operate (?)wie ist der Zusammenhang? Vielleicht "how they are related" oder "how relationships work" and what they like.
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> Thank's a lot
lg
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(Mitteilung) Reaktion unnötig | | Datum: | 10:20 Sa 30.05.2009 | | Autor: | matux |
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